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    The Deceiving Smile


      A sweetened smile so fair,
      upon an innocent face,
      her teeth glistened in the light,
      this girl had a clean case.

      If there ever was a problem,
      she would be there,
      no matter what the time.
      to  help to those deep in despair.

      She put on a brave face,
      and helped those in need,
      from problematic boyfriends,
      to suicidal weeds*.

      Yet who'd stop to think,
      to ask if she was okay?
      that this ball of sunshine,
      could be all out of rays.

      This so called 'brave face',
      is a figment of truth,
      to put on a show for the people,
      for her gloom to go, poof!

      What really hides inside,
      in the poor girls body,
      is the deepest of voids,
      built up by the gaudy.

      The darkness inside,
      created by sadness,
      that's been stored over time,
      From years of this madness.

      From bullying to heart ache,
      all kinds of this hatred,
      it just kills her inside,
      But she's too afraid to show it.  

      The hatred we speak of,
      becomes stronger each day,
      Just waiting to pounce,
      so get out of it's way.

      When the evil spills out,
      she will burst into flames,
      all these burdens she carries,
      will be the water that rains.

      No more sweet lil' thing,
      after this she's all gone,
      the evils engulfed her,
      what sweetness? There's none!

      Then she replaces her smile,
      to cover up her dark truth,
      and transform again,
      into a sinister sleuth.

      Her mask hides the truth,
      she's now but a girl,
      who's happy and cheerful,
      to all of the world.

      You'd never suspect it,
      the way that she acts,
      to hide her true feelings,
      behind that smile of a mask.

      But this is a girl,
      that you should not despise,
      her hatred will worsen,
      and she'll squish you like flies...

      The next time she helps you,
      Ask are you okay,
      your problems are hers,
      don't just leave it that way.

      By Chloe Winterbottom
        AKA tacofish.

      *Suicidal Weed - the idea of suicide, that grows more and more you think about it.
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A poem about a girl, I'll let you guess who...
Pretty deep coming from someone like me, but I seem to have a knack for writing them.
I'd like an opinion or critique on it.
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~Tenshi-no-Ame Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Chloe, you know you can talk to me right?
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~Blondefishy Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Katie, there's nothing up, don't worry :P If there was, you know I would of said :3 <3 Much love!
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~Tenshi-no-Ame Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...You'd better say if there was. Love you hubby~ :iconmegustaplz:
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~Blondefishy Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You know I would say ;P <3
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~Tenshi-no-Ame Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad. :)
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~twiggy248 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
This is beautiful...
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~Blondefishy Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much, That means a lot. :)
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~twiggy248 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist
You are welcome!! (:
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